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There's this lil' thread on orkut to create 3 sentence stories. These were 2 of my scribblings. Give it a read... they won't take much time in any case...

1.
and the curtain falls...
I never thought, today would be it. It always seemed to loom far away, beyond my reach, or anybody else's. I never thought a blade will change it all.

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2.
day of reckoning was near. The only thing keeping me from getting bald with constant hair splitting was the solace I found in her arms. The least I could do was to hold her hands tight while she delivered our baby to the world.
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[Its amazing how much strenght and love a woman harbours in that fragile lithe body of their's )

Comments

i wish i could write such 3-line stories..
awesome btw..
great goin jeenie..
the 2nd one ws very touchy...
at times it actually amazes me when i see guys too realize the pain women go through!
good work!
Ajinkya said…
thanx rich! :D
and damn, am i in awe of women's strenght or what!
i wish i could write such 3-line stories..
awesome btw..
great goin jeenie..
the 2nd one ws very touchy...
at times it actually amazes me when i see guys too realize the pain women go through!
good work!

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